1. What's up with the forum registration name?
First things first!
Please make sure that when you register, your forum username reflects the name of the main character who's applying for RnP. It makes for a better environment, and helps people understand who's who.
Having your character named Arthas (making it up of course), and your forum username being Lichkingboy23 is not going to help anyone.
2. Your fondest RP moment that you remember.
We asked for an RP moment, not a Raid leadership encounter Was it a roleplayed raid? Was was it a "gogogogog! healer heal ffs!!!111onone"?
I'd love a more RP'ish answer to this question.
As for the rest, looks good.