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Topic/Postby Gergel » 16 Jan 2015, 19:06

Fixed that for you.

Vaylera wrote:[The letter ends here. Near the final word, there would be a small hole, probably made from who wrote the letter, angry because of not being able to finish the letter properly.]


Pet peeve alert.

To paraphrase a certain small green dude: "Hole. Or no hole. There is no 'would'."

The hole in the letter presumably is not visible to one person but hidden from another, based on some condition. It is always there. Therefore: "there is a hole".

But I digress.
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