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/by Sven » 25 Aug 2016, 11:51
Gergel on 25 Aug 2016, 11:21 wrote:I'd like to offer a suggestion. Pick a tense and stick with it. Right now you keep switching back and forth between present and past. "Sven
does this, then Sven
did that, then the pirate
does the other thing."
I keep forgetting what I wrote last :< need to fix that
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